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the real fight by hiritai the real fight by hiritai
SNAP.

This guy has been through a big re-working. Character, appearence, blahblahblah. Trying to work him in with my other characters without changing the story was my aim, and I'm pretty sure this will work.

Deja 'Mystic' Sunder is his name, and rare/dangerous/powerful/mythical/historical artifacts are his game. Living in an ancient mine on the side of a mountain, Mystic has built an enormous library of secrets and other dangerous things. He keeps to himself, mostly, only sharing his hoard if you have something he wants more than whatever he already has (in which you'd better want more than anything else if you're climbing that damn mountain for just five minutes of his time).

Aside from that, he's done a lot of hunting. He'll hunt anything if the money/reward is good.

Mystic also thinks he is haunted by the ghost of his father, which inhabits a painting... when, really, he's just a bit nutty.


I actually bought him a dark brown wig, but I kind of maybe like this one better. Which is an expensive boo-boo, considering this one had been lying around for months :/ Kind of don't want him to have grey hair, but he looks so damn good in it x.x

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Mystic is a Crobidoll Lance from [link]

Please read my FAQ before asking any questions! Thanks for looking <3
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Your pohotography is wonderful but when you faded out some of the body it caught on to the hands and hair....but you may have wanted it to catch onto the hair...The pose and positioning is perfect. The way you made the doll look so expressive (not meaning that you shaped the face) but the pose and position of the face show meaning and expression... I think that if you had shown the whole body it would give the picture a more real feeling,unless the setting was wrong then the close-up was a wonderful Idea. I hope that you take some of this advice and use it, but I really am complimenting this in my own way
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I really have to say that i love his facial expression here compared to the position/pose you have him in. I like that they are very much opposites. He seems so thoughtful and at peace even though his situation appears to be a bit uncomfortable. It's almost as if he doesn't mind it so much. lol I love the color of his eyes as well and how they are really the only dark color in the light picture. This also reiterates the contrast of his 'feelings' for lack of a better word, and situation. I totally send kudos your way for wokring WITH his expression instead of trying to hide it like some doll owners do in order to get the image they want.
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Kingpoof Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifull face-up :love:
What a pretty boy!
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ElementalFoxGoddess Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
My my...what a beautiful boy!!....but I am going to try to make mine even more so....though I don't know a thing about realism.....so I am going to try to do the best I can.....I migh do it in anime though heheheh!! Love ur pic! He is beautiful!!! he has delicate hands!!
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MetropolisOni Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
I love his face. Did you do the face-up urself?
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Missepige Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
You inspired me to buy a doll like these too o__o
I love the picture, and the mix between sorrow and happiness, I feel. (I'm weird huh?). I looked on the website in the description, and I sure loved what I saw. I decided that if I ever get the money I would buy a Lance xD Then I read that the doll in your picture was a Lance O,O God I was surprised! Keep up this good work, and stick with the grey! It looks great <3 You WON him? I wish I was that lucky xD Each time I win something it's either cofee or towels =.=
seriously...it is... >.< Ever heard of Delfs? They are awesome Dolls too <3 They actually look really like these, but I don't know if they are the same xD
Luts is a good website to find a Delf, If you want to take a look ;)
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Dante03 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
SOOOO WONDERFUL!!!
Can you tell me with type of lance he is. I hope he's not the sold out out one cause i love him, and i want him.
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hiritai Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Thank you! <3 Lance are all the same, it's just the faceup that differs. He has a custom faceup, I won him in a contest and they just did him like this ^^
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Dante03 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009
They did a very good job with the face up. I'm kinda practicing but...It's not working out so well. And my poor Ducan's paying the price.:shakefist:
I wish i could show you pictures but, long story short brothers stick the wrong things in the wrong ports.
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ClevageMonsterx217 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
Beautiful! I love the colors in it :]
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evilnymph Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
here I download again. best inspiring doll ever.
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candygirlcandice Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009   Interface Designer
are u sure its a he?looks like a her..
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:iconretroninja:
RetroNinja Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
This photo is amazing. He looks like an angel. Love the quality and the detail. It's so breath-taking and amazing. I could look at the photo for hours in awe. *____*
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SierraTheCat Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought he was a girl! Gorgeous!
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misaki-lan Featured By Owner May 29, 2009
I've seen lots of lance, and Mystic is my favorite one. He's so cute and temperate. I cannot even describe how greatful and tender he is in words. I personally think he's the most gorgeous lance I've seen.
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Akatsuki-No-Adriane Featured By Owner May 28, 2009
omg i thought it was a girl but hes still really gorgouse!!
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:iconkoosha:
koosha Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Professional General Artist
word. :D
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Akatsuki-No-Adriane Featured By Owner May 30, 2009
lol
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:iconkurumi-flamesamurai:
KuRumi-FlameSamurai Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
Waaaaaaaaa!!! *dies* I love it so much :heart:!!!
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PestSunny Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
nice job . ;D
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xXxHXCxCassandraxXx Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
wow!
gorgeous! :3
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LidLuvsU Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Ohhh pretty =]
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:iconechoes-of-elaris:
Echoes-of-Elaris Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, what an intriguing story. I can't wait to learn more about him.

*hints at Mysticfics*
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Ran-ras Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
he's BEAUtiful.
yeah, grey hair looks good on him... but he looks like one of ur dolls.. he looks exactly like him..(sorry forgot the name) so the idea of changing his hair is not a bad idea... try it make him as graceful like him being in gray hair. ^^
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Kitrina-the-Great Featured By Owner May 3, 2009
I really the face paint, especially the detail in the eyes.
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RiKkU-DA-THieF Featured By Owner May 3, 2009
Oh wow, that looks brilliant. So pretty.. --pokes wig--
His faceup is so --squeeee--


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And on another completely unrelated note, what the sheet is this "Critique" crap? Like we need a Premium account to write critique about a work :\
What a load of shit XDD
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BloodyRose90 Featured By Owner May 2, 2009
It's so beautiful! I really adore your work :D
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:iconkingpoof:
Kingpoof Featured By Owner May 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifull. It looks so innocent ^^
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simonthefish Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009   Writer
I swear to god, every time you change his look I love him more.
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Tomoe21 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
where it's the "buy this print" button!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!!111
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:iconasterlei:
asterlei Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
Oh, he's so exquisite. Amazing. Stunningly beautiful and astonishingly breathtaking. I love it.
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TiedByLove Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
he looks very wise and patient! if the string wasn't there, he could be holding something out, or taking something. :D great job!
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yurecia Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
Hahah, I would climb the damn mountain to see such a pretty guy. Lovely expression he has there.8D
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DeidaraSenpai Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
Oh My God It's...BEAUTIFUL
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nejilover1601 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I like this one as well as the others. You really must have a lot of cash to dish out for them, but that's the dedication you got, which makes things really good on your end, cause it's worth it, right?
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Serihalt Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
the pose is really wonderful
i love the hair and the beautiful face...:heart:
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MorganJordan16 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
oh this is SO good....and so creative. i'm beginning to fall in love with it....its great! but most of all, i love the facial expression on his face. its the most important and the most meaningful in this. its the key and the thing that really makes this.

Great! :wow!:
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Meeeo Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
he's just perfect with gray hair :heart:
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Gee-Nius Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Holy shit he's looking amazing! ^^

The bio is awesome~
I love the new Mystic *3*

Well done c:
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Lann-eh Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
That hair is perfect
It suit his face up
And this the character you've come up for him he seems almost dusty like the things he collects? - and pale enough to be in a mine without really seeing the sun.

I think this is a good character for him :)
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mc-shit Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
his face! Such a serene look! Gorgeous! I love his lips ^_^
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ilmenhin Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this photo, =hiritai! Mystic looks gorgeous!
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luthienyavetil Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Student General Artist
It matches his eyebrows well. ^^ The gray does. Though he doesn't have that same look as he did with the darker one.

C8 But he's still, and always will be, freakin gorgeous.
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ShinkonoKokoro Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He does look incredibly fantastic in that silver/gray wig. I really like it. It seems to suit him.
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HakaiAkumu Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Student General Artist
bounty hunter mystic, i like that idea.
maybe you should give that brown wig a try, not the grey one looks bad, on the contrary it looks great on him, but he kinda looks like sephiroth to me if i stare a lot .x. maybe its the eyes i dunno...
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Armadas Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
I really hate repeating what others have already said but Mystic is the most beautiful Crobi Lance evAr! Definitely worthy of a first place prize for your well composed photographs. I'm so glad he was awarded to you, since I'm positive there will be an inundation of his pictures <3 His face-up looks flaw-less and matches perfectly with his new wig! It makes me happy seeing him in my watch box xD
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The-Lady-Blue Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Student Photographer
He looks so amazing. I love his face and those eyes! Wow!
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MyVizmXXX Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
so pretty~ i love the hair!
maybe brown would be better tho...? i love how you tied his hands! ah its so cool! :D
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Modsoul123 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
Whoa, big character reworking there! But still sounds real awesome.

Eyes are gorgeous *A* and the grey wig does suit him, but it would be cool to see Mystic as a brunette. ^^
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bananabonita Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
oh emm eff gee, beautiful!
:+fav:
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silent-visions Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Student General Artist
This wig makes him look quite ethereal and intriguing at the same time. Also his neclace is so eye-catching.

Speaking of the photo itself, I love how colors here are so peaceful and warm. That adds a lot of atmosphere to the photo.


...and Crobidoll Lance is such a beautiful mold <3
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EspeonConfuzeon Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
*Climbs up the mountian, knocks on his door, then asks if she can borrow a cup of sugar*

Me: *hides*
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